Weird book research

Not long ago, I was discussing with a fellow author the various sorts of odd research we’ve done that might raise a few eyebrows (or perhaps suspicions of wrong-doing) if someone who didn’t know we were writers looked at our web history. How odd? Well, I’d say these are the most eyebrow-raising topics I’ve googled in the past year (for five different books):

-where to shoot someone so they die instantly
-Japanese swords and other weaponry
-how to draw your own blood (there are Youtube videos!)
-famous Middle Eastern rebels
-common foal deformities
-least painful ways to commit suicide
-the gas mileage of army trucks

It’ll be interesting to see what new and bizarre things I’ll need to look up this year…

If you’re an author, or do research for other purposes — what’s the strangest topic you’ve ever looked into?

The Way We Fall Trailer Giveaway!

Note: The giveaway is now closed to entries. Thank you to all who participated!

I promised earlier that I was cooking up a contest involving the trailer for The Way We Fall, and with the release less than three weeks away, it’s time to get cracking! 🙂

The Trailer

Or see it here.

The Prizes

Five winners chosen by random draw will receive a signed hardcover of The Way We Fall, a The Way We Fall journal and pen (so you can record your own life-changing events), a bottle of hand sanitizer (to keep those pesky germs away), a magnet, and a bookmark.

I am hoping that my author copies will arrive soon enough that I can get the book to you before the release date, to make the prize even more special — cross your fingers for fast shipping!

How to Enter

1. Share the trailer! On your blog, Tumblr, Facebook, Twitter — as many different places as you like. Each place you post it or the link to it, please also include the book title (The Way We Fall), the author (Megan Crewe), the release date (Jan 24/12), and a link to this entry mentioning a chance to win a copy. (If this needs to be split up between two tweets, that’s fine.)

2. Comment here letting me know where you’ve shared the trailer. You receive one entry for each place you posted it.

And that’s all there is to it!

The giveaway is open to entries from now until 11:59pm EST on Jan 11th, to anyone in the world. Good luck!

The Way We Fall Inspirations and Giveaway: Connie Willis’s Doomsday Book

Previous TWWF inspiration posts: The Stand and The Forest of Hands and Teeth

After my Forest of Hands and Teeth-inspired nightmare and subsequent decision that I needed to write a plague book, I started picking up novels here and there that featured epidemics. Some authors prefer to avoid books with similar subject matter when they’re working on a new project, because they’re concerned they’ll unconsciously lift ideas, but for me it’s the opposite. I want to know what’s already been done with a concept, so I can make sure I’m not just rehashing well-covered ground. And similar books often suggest to me avenues to explore in my own, that I feel those books neglect or that I’d like to approach in a different way.

Among the books I read during that period was Doomsday Book by Connie Willis.

I’d first read Doomsday Book a few years earlier, and loved it. It involves two epidemics, an invented one in a near future where historians travel through time to study the past, and one that actually existed, in the past one of those historians travels back to: the Black Death.

It was Willis’s portrayal of the latter that stuck with me the most, and that I found most affecting when I re-read the novel. Particularly I was struck by how she and Kivrin (the main character) grapple with the fact that this past has already happened. These people cannot necessarily be saved, regardless of how hard Kivrin tries. So does it even matter that she has tried?

It’s a powerful theme, and one that I hadn’t see tackled before, at least not in the same way. As I read the novel again, with my own killer virus idea in mind, I realized that my characters were going to be dealing with similar issues. Most of them would be teens, with no medical training and no background in microbiology. There wouldn’t be much they could do, to help someone infected with a mysterious deadly disease. In the face of that knowledge, how were they going to find the will to keep fighting? Would they find that will? Should they?

I mentioned not long ago that the most important thing I need from a new book idea is meaning. Doomsday Book helped me identify what was powerful and meaningful to me about Kaelyn’s story in The Way We Fall, and I give much thanks to Connie Willis for that.

Giveaway completed. Thanks to all who entered!

On the eve of a new year

2011 has been an interesting year — a year of being in the middle of things. I didn’t start any new books (other than a sequel that continued an existing story), I didn’t sell any new books (not really surprising, having just sold three last year), and I had no new books come out. I did write and revise that sequel, as well as rewriting a couple of books I’d drafted in rough earlier and polishing them to get them submission-ready. I’ve done most of my preparations for The Way We Fall‘s launch, even though it isn’t out until next month. And it was an amazing year for traveling to new places and meeting new people, from Kindling Words back in January and the manatee-blessed Florida retreat in February, to the Japan trip that almost didn’t happen in April and our ten days in France this October.

Oh, and my previously common-law-husband and I got officially married, which I suppose warrants a mention. 😉

How well did I do with my goals for the year?

-Write and polish the sequel to THE WAY WE FALL. Done!
-Write second drafts for and polish the two books waiting in rough draft (BEAST and the Japan book). Also done!
-I wouldn’t mind getting a new book started in rough draft but this may be asking too much. Yeah… I’ve written the first new chapters of a new book, but I somehow suspect that’s not getting finished by the end of today.
-Attend at least one writing conference. I did go to Kindling Words, which I suppose sort of counts.
-Do at least one event for GHOST in paperback. I did my big online giveaway. Ended up being too busy to organize something in person.
-Start attending kung fu class at least *twice* a week when possible. When possible, I did.
-Keep the backyard and garden a little more tidy than they were last year (which is to say, not a complete disaster). Err… This got abandoned in order to make the writing goals happen.
-Start blogging more regularly again! At least in the last few months, I think I have.

My goals for 2012:

-Write and polish the third book in the trilogy.
-Stay reasonably focused despite the excitement and anxiety of seeing my second book finally out!
-Finish the rough draft of the current new project, and preferably a second draft as well.
-Read more. I’ve been so busy writing this year my reading has fallen off — I’d like to finish at least one book a week.
-Exercise more in between kung fu classes.
-A personal goal I’ll mention next New Year’s Eve if it happens. 🙂

Hope you all have had more good times than bad this year, and that 2012 brings you many great things!

Tools for working with new story ideas

Since I’ve been talking this month about the elements I need to make sure a new story idea is ready to be (and warrants being) written, I figured it might be useful if I also shared the tools I use to help me get those new ideas into shape.

I am not very organized at all when it comes to story planning. There are many very involved methods of plotting and charting character development out there, which work very well for many people, but I find if I try to squeeze my ideas into boxes that are particularly rigid or divided into particularly small parts, my brain shuts down. I have learned, though, that having a fairly loose structure to hang my brainstorming on can make it easier to solve story problems and result in a better written book in the end.

For a long time, I really just thought in terms of a slightly expanded three act screenplay structure–that is, three act structure with a break in the middle of the second act that’s the “point of no return.”

There are lots of articles you can read about three act structure, which approach it from a variety of ways. For my purposes, I thought of it as being: Act 1 – introducing the main characters and their situation, ending with the incident that starts the main conflict of the story in motion; Act 2 Pt. 1 – the main character attempts to deal with the problem in ways that mainly fail, ending with a moment that overturns his/her expectations and assumptions about the problem; Act 2 Pt. 2 – the main character attempts to solve the problem with this new understanding, but the problem gets worse and s/he’s still struggling even as s/he’s figuring out what to do, ending with the problem getting so bad it seems unsurmountable; Act 3 – the main character has to take drastic action to fix the problem (also known as the climax), resolution. Act 1 is usually as short as possible, and Act 2 is usually split fairly close to the middle, but otherwise I didn’t worry too much about exact proportions.

You can see this in Give Up the Ghost if you look for it. (The mid-story turning point, for example, is when Cass finally gets to confront Danielle at the party, but finds she doesn’t feel any better for it.) The Way We Fall‘s structure is a little more scattered, mainly because of the journal format, but it does hit the same points.

Recently I’ve started using a couple of resources that provide a little more structure, which I’ve found useful for more plot-y stories, and particularly for planning a sequel, something I’d never done before.

One is a more in-depth three act structure: Michael Hauge’s Six Stage Plot Structure. I don’t bother with the percentages, but I find breaking the story down into a few more stages and turning points than I did before makes it easier for me to figure out what parts of the idea should happen when, and when I don’t have enough happening and need to brainstorm more.

The other is the book The Anatomy of Story by John Truby. Though some parts of this book recommend strategies that are too analytical for me (and result in that brain-shutting-down feeling), I’ve found the chapters on premise, story structure, and character hugely useful in figuring out what the focus of my story should be, what sorts of things my characters need to be doing, how they might grow, and how they can interact with each other in interesting and plot-driving ways.

Truby disparages the three act structure, but I think the two approaches actually work together quite well. 🙂 I used both when working on The Way We Fall‘s sequel (and I’d give examples, except that would be spoiling a series most of you haven’t read the first book in yet!), as well as another project I hope to be able to tell you about before too long.

Sometimes there’s so much I want to do with a story idea that I get overwhelmed, and having those structures to draw on helps tame all that inspiration into something useable.

Fellow authors — what story structuring or idea developing tools have you found useful in your writing, if any?

The Way We Fall Inspirations and Giveaway: Carrie Ryan’s The Forest of Hands and Teeth

Previous TWWF inspiration post: The Stand

It makes sense for me to bring up this second book that helped inspire The Way We Fall immediately after The Stand, because the two basically took a tag team approach to convincing me I needed to write about an epidemic. The second book being The Forest of Hands and Teeth by Carrie Ryan.

I got to read The Forest of Hands and Teeth a few months early, in late 2008, as part of the ARC swapping done among the 2009 Debs. I stayed up later than I normally would to finish it, because I needed to know how it ended, and then, as I relate in this post shortly after the fact, I had the only other nightmare I’ve ever had that was based on a book. It involved one particular plot development, which I won’t spoil if you haven’t read it, but it was emotionally wrenching specifically because of the infectious nature of the zombie condition. Because the most horrifying element for me was imagining what it would be like to be infected or have someone you care about infected and know there’s nothing that can stop the disease from following its course towards the inevitably awful end.

And as you can see in the post I linked to, when I thought about that, and how the only other book that affected me that much was The Stand, I knew I needed to write a book about my own mysterious and deadly virus.

It took a year of brainstorming and researching and outlining (I didn’t start the first draft until the end of 2009), but finally I did write that book, and that book was of course The Way We Fall.

Giveaway completed. Thanks to all who entered!

What I need to write: Meaning

This is the last element of an idea that I need if I’m going to turn that idea into a book, and it’s probably the most important, but also the hardest to reach. The other elements I’ve talked about — a character with an arc, a compelling problem, and an understanding of all the important motivations and angles — are somewhat mechanical. I understand how they work. It may take me a while before I can find a character with some growing to do who fits the plot I want to portray, but I know an arc when I see one, and there are methods I can use to make one deeper or more interesting where there’s potential. Not every story problem may be viable, but I can tell the difference between the ones that are and aren’t with some fairly basic criteria.

But the truth is, none of that matters unless the story has meaning.

This is something I realized a few years ago, and I’ve talked about it before, so I won’t ramble on about it too much. But as I said there, what it really comes down to is that I have to care about whether this particular story gets told. It has to feel important. It has to, in essence, mean something to me.

What creates that meaning? I don’t know, and that’s what makes this part so hard. Every now and then something just clicks, and I find myself thinking, yes, that is so true, I need to find a way to capture that feeling/idea/whatever. Every story, underneath the characters and the plot, is about something. Give Up the Ghost is about how lifeless life is when you’ve cut yourself off from everyone living, and how even when you’ve been hurt, it’s better to keep taking risks than to make yourself that hollow. The Way We Fall says things to me about hope, and fear, and whether it’s meaningful to keep trying even if you’re not succeeding.

I can’t make that click for every story. Sometimes it takes years before I understand what the story is really about, and why I want to tell it. But I need it to write. Without it the story is just an empty collection of parts, which may be pretty and shiny, but which won’t truly come alive until that meaning is breathed into them.

What I need to write: All the angles

As discussed earlier, before I get started writing a brand new idea, I need a main character with an arc and a compelling problem that character can take steps to solve. Sounds like a whole book right there, doesn’t it? Yeah, not so much.

Something I’ve realized more and more with each book I write is that to make sure the story’s working, I need to consider not just my main character’s point of view, but the POV of every character who affects the direction of the story. It doesn’t matter how compelling and exciting the conflict is, if the antagonist has no reason to have created this problem in the first place. It doesn’t matter how sweet the romance is, if the love interest only exists when it’s convenient for me to have him or her show up. And if I go into the story without making sure that all of the important characters have reasonable motivations for the things they do, there’s a pretty good chance that story is broken, and either I’ll have to abandon my work completely, or start over from scratch. It’s much better to work these things out ahead of time.

So when I’m playing with a new idea, I’ve gotten in the habit of frequently switching hats. I know why the main character’s going to do what she’s doing in this key scene–do I know why her enemies are attacking her in this way? Does this actually help their cause, or am I making them do it because I thought it’d be a good scene? Would her best friend really turn away from her here, based on their history together, or did I just want an extra dramatic punch? If the answers to either are the latter, then I have some more thinking to do. Maybe I need to figure out reasons that these things would actually happen (which are then going to change the story and the characters). Maybe I need to figure out different things that could happen that do fit the characters.

Not every story can be unbroken. Sometimes I realize that an essential element actually makes no sense at all when I look at it from all angles. Some concepts sound really cool when I only have a vague sense of them, but fall apart under closer scrutiny. No one would ever do that. No one could ever have gotten away with that. The only reasonable way someone could respond in that situation would shut the whole story down.

But that’s okay. At least I usually see the unsealable cracks before I put too much work in, which leaves me a whole lot more time to devote to the ideas that aren’t so broken.

The Way We Fall Inspirations and Giveaway: Stephen King’s The Stand

I’d say there are five books that provided an important inspiration for my writing of The Way We Fall. And since The Way We Fall officially hits bookstores in five weeks, it seems like a good time to share those books with you, one each week before the release date, to give you an idea of how my book came to be.

The first: The Stand by Stephen King.

You can tell how key The Stand was as inspiration, because I mention it in the very first post I made about the idea that would become The Way We Fall. I first read The Stand way back when I was 13 years old, shortly before the miniseries came out — because even at that age, I knew I wanted to experience the book before the filmed version. I remember starting it late in the evening, and not being able to put it down until well after when I’d usually have gone to sleep, when I got to the end of the first section, after the deadly flu has wiped out the majority of the world’s population.

Later that night, I jolted awake in a cold sweat with my heart racing, as if I’d just broken out of a terrifying nightmare. But I couldn’t remember a single thing about what I’d been dreaming. It’s the only time in my life I’ve woken up that scared, and the only time in my life a nightmare has scared me without me being able to remember it. But I have no doubt it had to do with what I’d been reading. The idea of catching a deadly disease has been one of the most frightening things I can imagine since I was a kid, mainly because it’s one of the few scary ideas you come across that is actually quite plausible (more more present than monsters or dark magic or even realistic but distant problems like war).

I still think of The Stand almost every time I notice someone who’s sick, and every time I get a cold myself. Reading it helped me realize many years later just how emotionally affected I am by the thought of an epidemic or plague. And it was because I realized just how deeply I’m affected by those concepts that I decided I needed to write a book about them.

(My other association with The Stand is rather less serious. My dad read it a few years before me, when I was ten or so. Seeing the cover, I asked him what the book was about, and he — in his usual teasing way — informed me that it was about a battle over a vegetable stand, the carrots and peas at war. I knew he was pulling my leg, but I can’t help thinking of his comment every time I think of the book.)

Giveaway completed. Thanks to all who entered!

It’s really real!

I usually try not to post twice in one day, but I think circumstances require it. Look what just showed up at my door!

The very first copies of The Way We Fall, the actual book.

My camera doesn’t really do it justice. The yellow is much more saturated, and the title text (front and spine) is embedded in that glossy yellow with this matte, slightly gritty texture. I may have been petting it. A lot.

I’m going to have a whole bunch more copies very soon, and some of those I’ll be sharing with you!