Report on the retreat

For the second time this month, I’m back! This time from my in-person critique group’s fourth annual writing retreat. 🙂

The five of us who were able to make it convened at a cottage just east of Parry Sound, which turned out to be even more ideal than it sounded online. All the trees made it totally private, there was a big living room and kitchen for us to hang out it, lots of big windows for excellent views, and three of the four bedrooms had a little balcony!


(The view from my balcony)

I very quickly set up a writing spot down by the lake, where the was a bunkie with a deck, and a handy electrical outlet on the outside wall! It also came with handy log seats to act as water bottle/notebook holder and foot rest:

One of the special features of this spot was that, because the cottage was on quite a high hill, I had to go down a whole lot of steps to get to it, which meant if I had any thoughts about heading back to the cottage for any sort of non-writing activity, I had this view to discourage me:


(About half the the stairs you’d have to climb up to get to the cottage)

Not that I ended up needing a great deal of encouragement to keep writing. This is the first time I was finishing a book at the retreat instead of starting one, and having all that plot and character development already in place created a lot of momentum. My goal was to finish the book by the end of the retreat, and I have returned victorious! I typed “The End” at 9:20pm on the last night we were there. I got down about 29,000 words in four days, bringing the total for the book to just over 73K.

I think it can be said that a most fun and productive time was had by all.


(All of us on the dock–sorry, this was the best lighting we could get!)

A writer reading

Ever wonder what a writer’s bookshelves might look like? You can see mine in all their overflowing glory over at this interview for The Readings of a Busy Mom. My kids/YA bookcase (stacked two deep, with whiteboard for jotting WIP notes and maps), for example:

The glass shelves may not look so pretty, but they’re perfect for placing around windows because they don’t block the light. 🙂

In the interview, I also talk about where I read and why, and a few for my all time favorite books.

And that’s what I’ll leave you with today, because it’s retreat time!

The end of the trip

As promised, the final report on my trip to Nova Scotia!

There was a lot of driving in the last couple days, but on pretty quiet roads, so I didn’t mind. The best part was having Chris put on my THE WAY WE FALL playlist (aptly titled “plague book” 😉 ) during the long stretches. Hearing those some of those songs while driving through the landscapes my characters would have grown up in gave me the shivers, literally.

Our first stop was up on Digby Neck, where we went out on a whale-watching cruise. We got to see several humpback whales (including one that breached–leapt out of the water!) as well as dolphins, porpoises, and a brief glimpse of a seal. Hard to take pics of them, but here’s my best attempt with the whales:

Then we headed to the beautiful little town of Annapolis Royal, where I got to take a spooky and historical graveyard tour and we stayed in the oldest inn there, by far our favorite of the places we stayed, Hillsdale House:

Totally recommend it if you’re ever in the area.

Our last full day, we checked out some more cliffs, in the Blomidon Provincial Park. It’s on the Bay of Fundy, so the tides are very extreme–the water depth changing by a few dozen feet between low and high tide. We were at the beach close to low tide, and you can get some idea of how much of the sea floor was left bare:

And then it was time to come home. But I’m sure we’ll return some day!

I am home…

…and alive, and very tired. Will be catching up on comments and e-mails over the weekend, and posting about the last part of the Nova Scotia trip on Monday.

And then I will be taking off again!

Good night!

Further down the coast (Nova Scotia blog #2)

Yesterday was quite a fun day, as we mostly just wandered around wherever looked interesting on our way down to our next stayover stop. The first place we came across was Ovens Natural Park, which focuses on the cliffs and ocean caves along the Atlantic coast. The waves crashing inside the caves make a distinctive booming sound, and there are all sorts of steps and walkways built into the side of the cliffs so you can peer (and sometimes even walk) inside. And it was useful for me to see, because a cliff plays an important role in THE WAY WE FALL.

A little further down the coast, we took a break at Rissers Beach:

The sun only came out for a little while, but long enough for me to get into the water for a bit. Can’t come to the ocean without going for a swim!

It was a good thing I did then, because today has been too overcast and occasionally rainy for either of us to feel like taking a dip. But we still went over to Cape Sable Island to see an actual Nova Scotia island community. And while we were there, I found a house that fit what I pictured for Kaelyn’s! (Though hers would be on a town street, with neighbors closer by.)

Tomorrow we’re setting off to catch a whale watching cruise. Wish us luck seeing a humpback whale or two!

Blogging from Nova Scotia!

Hurray! I have gotten this to work. (It’s been a little tricky because my laptop can’t handle certain WiFi networks, and I can’t edit photos on my iPad.)

Today we drove to Peggy’s Cove, one of the best known Nova Scotian locations. Mostly for this lighthouse, and the unique rocky landscape:

It is lovely, but at little overwhelmed with tourists. Only a few dozen people actually live in the village, and at least three times as many tourists there with us in the short period we were visiting. But it was really interesting seeing what a small fishing village on the coast looks like:

Then we zipped along to Lunenburg, which is full of gorgeous historic houses (the oldest was built in 1780). Here’s one of our favourites:

We enjoyed the varied color schemes many of the houses are painted in. This row gives a good example of what I mean:

Much brighter and more interesting than the plain old gray/brown/beige back home! 🙂

All this is giving me a much stronger sense of the town in THE WAY WE FALL. I’m still looking for a house that feels like Kaelyn’s house, though–the ones pictured above are too fancy, of course!

Off to Shelburne tomorrow–I’ll blog again later if the WiFi circumstances align.

Holiday time!

In the next couple of weeks, I’m going to take two trips: one to Nova Scotia, and one up to cottage country.

Neither of these trips is totally (or even mostly) for relaxation. THE WAY WE FALL is set in Nova Scotia, and I wanted to take the opportunity to explore the landscape and towns firsthand before I start editorial revisions. And I’m going to cottage country for my critique group’s fourth annual writing retreat! I hope to finish my current WIP while I’m there, and maybe do some additional brainstorming for FALL’s sequel as well. But I’m sure there’ll be lots of fun had in both places as well. 🙂

Naturally, this means that blogging in the next couple weeks will be infrequent (if not non-existent). I’m considering attempting at least a few posts on the go, but have never managed that before, so we’ll see. But even if there’s total blog silence, when I get back there will be many pictures and stories to share!

As a heads up: I will have internet access in most of the places I’m staying but will only be checking e-mail sporadically, so if you try to get in touch, it may take longer than usual for me to get back to you.

Hope all of you enjoy the rest of your summer just as much as I will!

Reader Question: Other careers

If you weren’t an author, what would your dream job be?

This is hard for me to imagine, because even if I wasn’t published at this point in my life, as long as I could write I’d still be writing and pursuing that dream. And it’s hard to imagine not being able to write!

I’d probably be doing something similar to what’s been my day job for the last ten years. I’m a behavioral therapist for kids and teens with special needs, and I really enjoy working with young people (just as I like writing for them!) and knowing I’m helping those who need it become more independent and successful in whatever they end up wanting to do.

Event reminder: Author Day at Toronto Eaton Centre

A quick reminder for Toronto area folks: on Sunday, August 22nd I’ll be appearing at the Indigo – Toronto Eaton Centre in the teen section, from 1pm to 3pm.

I’ll have bookmarks and buttons to hand out, and would love to chat with any readers who stop by! And of course I’ll happily answer questions about my forthcoming books. 🙂

As part of Indigo’s Local Author Days, there should also be other authors in different sections of the store for you to meet.

Hope to see you there!

Reader Question: Editorial process

What I want to know more about is the editorial process you went through with GHOST–-how long was your editorial letter, how many of them did you get, how big were the changes, how many drafts did your editor read?

Okay, some of this is working off of memory, because GHOST’s revisions started more than three years ago and I haven’t hung on to the ed. letters. (I kind of wish I had, as mementos of the process, but I’ve moved twice since then and you get to a point where anything you don’t absolutely have to hold on to, you chuck rather than find another box for it.)

The first editorial revision I did for GHOST was before it sold–an editor at Holt was interested but wanted some changes made before bringing it to acquisitions. That letter came by e-mail and was quite short (since it’s electronic I still have it so I can check): a little more than a page. It focused on one major character issue the editor had. I didn’t have to make any big changes, but I did need to adjust Cass’s voice and actions across the entire book, so I did a full rewrite.

That editor loved the rewrite, and was able to offer on the book. After which we went through three rounds of revisions. The first letter was about eight pages, I think, and involved taking out a subplot and replacing the scenes that referred to it with others, some more minor character and plot tweaking, and altering the pacing and some of the events at the climax and ending. The second (about four pages) was mostly small tweaks with some more changes to the ending and the third was line edits, so all in the marked up manuscript. (All three revision notes included a marked up manuscript as well as the letters.) For each of those I just made changes as I went and rewrote scenes only when necessary rather than rewriting the whole thing. Then we were on to copy-edits!

So in total… My editor read the original submission, the pre-offer revision I did for her, that revision again when she was coming up with the first editorial letter and marking up the manuscript, the first post-offer revision, the second post-offer revision, the third post-offer revision, the copy-edited manuscript, and the page proofs. So she read it at least eight times! Just one reason why an editor has to really be in love with a book to make an offer on it. Can you imagine reading the same book eight times in the course of a year and a half?