The Lives We Lost Book Launch Party!

I’m pleased to invite you all to the launch party for The Lives We Lost!

When: Wednesday February 20th, 7pm – 9pm
Where: No One Writes to the Colonel, 460 College St. (just west of Bathurst), Toronto, ON
What: Reading. Books sold and signed (both The Lives We Lost and The Way We Fall in paperback). Swag given away. Refreshments and cash bar. And for those worried about what to do if a real apocalypse arrives, demonstrations of survival techniques from the Highlands Wilderness Training Institute.
RSVP: On Facebook or in the comments.

Hope to see many of you there!

Starting at the end…

Something only my earliest critique partners know is that the first draft of Give Up the Ghost started with Cass preparing to go to prom while talking with Paige — an extended version of the scene that now appears in the last chapter of the book, ending with her reminiscing about how she came to be planning to go to prom at all, and looping back to what is now the beginning of the book.

The technique of starting with an intriguing or tense scene from the end of the story before going back to show how it all began is a well-loved one. Heck, Twilight does it. But it didn’t end up feeling right for GHOST. The risk with giving away part of the ending is you leave the reader knowing something that’s coming, so that part of the ending can no longer be a surprise. Basically, the suspense created by wondering how the character will get there has to be greater than the suspense lost by knowing where they’re going.

Now I have a new idea that might start at the end. I love the idea of using this particular scene as the opening. But I’m also wondering if it’s definitely worth the risk.

So I’m curious to hear: How do you feel about books that start with a glimpse of the end? What makes that work or not work for you? Any favorite examples?

Paperback delay

Those of you who’ve been waiting for the paperback of The Way We Fall may have noticed that the release date started sliding around the beginning of this month. It was originally supposed to be out this past Tuesday. Unfortunately, there was an error in the original printing, so Hyperion has had to do a new run to make sure the books look the way they’re supposed to, which has set everything back a few weeks. The new release date is February 5th, which still gives you a week to read before book 2 is out! Or just a week to look at this lovely cover, if you’ve already read it…

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To celebrate the paperback release, I’ll be having an open discussion in which you can ask every and any question you might have about the book — and I’ll try to answer all of them as thoroughly as I can (without spoilers for the rest of the trilogy). So if you were wondering why I made a certain choice with the story or why a certain character did what they did, stop by this blog on Feb 5th and we’ll chat about it!

Fallen World Street Team assemble!

A new year is upon us! The Way We Fall comes out in paperback with its lovely updated cover in less than a week, and the second book in the trilogy, The Lives We Lost, will be out in a little more than a month. Which means it’s time for me to call the Fallen World trilogy fans to action!

Many of you awesome people have already joined my street team, and will be receiving the list of street team activities shortly. But there’s always room for more! Readers from all around the world are welcome. If you’d like to sign up for the Fallen World Street Team, just enter your email address in the form below.

If you need extra incentive beyond a love for the books, here it is. The two people who complete the most street team activities, and two street teamers chosen by random draw, will receive the following prize pack:

-Signed hardcover of The Lives We Lost, with five notes (different in each copy) giving background about what’s going on in the story, info on why I made the choices I did, or other behind the scenes secrets.
-Signed paperback of The Way We Fall.
-Signed hardcover of Give Up the Ghost.
-A short excerpt from the beginning of Book 3. (not pictured)
-A The Way We Fall journal and pen.
-A survival pack including hand sanitizer, a water bottle, and a mini first aid kit.
-An iTunes giftcard you can use to buy songs from the unofficial soundtracks, or any other music to keep you going on long journeys. (not pictured–ecard)

Of course, I want to show my thanks to all my street teamers. So all active street team members will receive a signed bookplate, bookmark, and magnet, and have their names added to a thank you list on my website (unless you’d rather not)!

And street teamers get extra entries in future giveaways, as well as first dibs on new ARCs and donations to giveaways on their own blogs.

Sound good to you? You have until February 26th to join in! Sign up and I’ll send you the activity list ASAP. 🙂

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Red ink

This blog has been pretty quiet this month, not just because of the holidays, but also because I got my editorial letter for Fallen World book 3 at the very beginning of December. So I have been hard at work over the last few weeks, revising the book into the best possible trilogy end I can make it. And since I just finished up (this round — there’s another to come) today, I thought I’d share a little of the process.

I love computers. They are wonderful devices that make many things possible! And I do almost all of my writing, rewriting, and revising on my laptop. But before I send a new draft to my editor, I always print the manuscript out and go over it with red pen. For some reason it’s harder to miss typos and awkward wording on printed paper than on the screen. And there’s a funny sort of pleasure to crossing out unnecessary lines and noting corrections in red ink.

I don’t go easy on myself. Here are a couple of representative pages — and remember, this is polishing things up after I already finished the main revision:

It’s a rare page that has no red on it at all. My books aren’t perfect, and they will never please everyone (as with any book, really!), but I’ll be damned if I’m not going to get them as close to my idea of perfect as I can before I allow them out into the world.

The Lives We Lost holiday ARC giveaway!

So… I have just one ARC of The Lives We Lost left unclaimed. One ARC which is the only way you will get a physical copy of the lovely original cover:

One ARC which I am giving away as a holiday present to one lucky reader!

Open to readers anywhere in the world, for one week, and I’ll do my very best to ship it so it gets to the winner before Christmas (though I can’t promise, because the mail system gets a little chaotic during the holidays). Even if it’s a little late, you’ll still get it more than a month before the book is released!

Here’s a bunch of ways you can enter:

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Good luck!

Extending the apocalypse… tour

Hey all–and particularly Ontario folks! You remember that awesome YA Apocalypse Tour that happened last month with me, Leah Bobet, Lesley Livingston, Maureen McGowan, Cheryl Rainfield, and Courtney Summers? Well, we’re counting on the 2012 apocalypse not happening after all, and are starting to talk about a reunion tour celebrating our survival in the new year.

And since those talks are just getting started, we have quite a bit of flexibility still!

We’re up for traveling pretty much anywhere within about two hours’ drive of Toronto. And we want to meet as many of you Ontario YA readers as possible. So please comment and let me know if there are specific towns or cities where you’d be able to come. Wherever the most people are eager to see us, we’ll do our best to go.

Hope I’ll be seeing you soon!

Foreign editions giveaway

I promised when I did the last giveaway that I’d be doing one open to all readers before too long. And here it is! In celebration of the love my books have gotten outside North America, I’m offering six foreign editions to anyone from any part of the world. 🙂

Up for grabs are three copies of the Australian edition of The Way We Fall (in English), two copies of the Hungarian edition of The Way We Fall (in Hungarian), and one copy of the German edition of Give Up the Ghost (in German). I wish I had even more to share, but these are the only foreign editions I’ve gotten my hands on so far. Check them out:

I’ve set up three different rafflecopters for people who are only interested in one or two of the editions — naturally I want you to win a book you can actually read if you so desire! But you can enter all three if you wish.

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Good luck to you!

Fallen World Street Team now forming!

The release of The Lives We Lost is just two and a half months away, and Fallen World trillogy fans, I’d love to get your help. Earlier this year, I asked you to infect your friends with excitement for The Way We Fall… Now it’s time to infect the world!

What that means for you:

From now until the end of December, I’m seeking members for the Fallen World Street Team. At the beginning of January, I’ll send around a list of tasks you can fulfill to earn FWST points. Those points will go towards a massive giveaway featuring signed books, survival gear, swag, and more! You don’t need to have a blog; lots of the tasks will be things anyone can do. And you can do as many or as few as you like.

Extra Bonuses:

-As long as you do a few of the tasks (or one big one), you’ll get a signed bookmark and bookplate!
-Everyone who signs up for the street team gets five entries in the giveaway I’ll be holding soon for my last remaining ARC of The Lives We Lost (plus other awesome stuff).
-The street team will get first dibs on future ARCs, swag, and giveaway donations for their own blogs (if applicable).

The Fallen World Street Team is open to anyone 13 years of age or older, anywhere in the world. Sign up using the form below!


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Diversity and Difference in YA

Yesterday at the 2012 World Fantasy Convention, I spoke on the Diversity and Difference in YA Fantasy panel with excellent company from Cheryl Rainfield, Cinda Williams Chima, E.C. Myers, and our moderator Kathy Sullivan. It was great to see how many people came out to hear about and discuss the topic (especially since we were competing with Garth Nix’s reading).

It’s such an important topic, and one I think is on a lot of authors’ minds right now, so I wanted to recap my thoughts and some of the ideas that came up during the panel here.

Necessary disclaimer: I’m hardly an authority on the subject. Being white, straight, able-bodied and relatively able-minded, I know I’m looking at the topic of diversity from a position of privilege. I don’t understand what it’s like not to see yourself represented in the stories you read the same way that someone who’s LGBT or a person of color would. Most of my thoughts on the subject are based on what I’ve heard from authors and readers who do see themselves under- or misrepresented, and I may not always have absorbed what I’ve heard completely accurately.

But I have been seeking out those perspectives, and trying to apply them to my own writing, because I think diversity is important for everyone. It’s important for all readers to find characters who represent their own experiences, and not to feel they’re being ignored, or worse, considered inferior. It’s important for readers to have access to views and stories that take them beyond their own lives in a variety of ways. Why wouldn’t we want our fiction to reflect the diversity and differences that exist in the world? Why would we spend hours pouring over Google maps and image searches to try to get a setting right, but give hardly any thought to making sure the people inhabiting that setting are equally authentic? Even if you balk at the idea of someone telling you that you “should” be inclusive, the fact is it’s also just good writing.

And for a lot of us, adding realistic diversity to our writing is something that takes conscious effort. Unfortunately, at least in North America, our defaults seem to be set on white/male/straight. (You might question the “male” part of that statement for YA, which is known for the predominance of female main characters, but consider in those female-led stories, if you look at all the secondary and more minor characters, what’s the gender split there? I suspect you’d have trouble finding many stories where if you break down all the named characters by gender, there are even an equal number of men and women, let alone more women than men.) I’ve lived all my life in Toronto, where nearly half of the people around me are visible minorities. Where there’s been a huge gay pride celebration every year since shortly after I was born. I’ve had close friends from all different backgrounds. I am a woman. And yet for a long time almost all my major characters were white and straight, and the minor ones tended to be male, too. I still have to watch myself, when I’m writing the bit parts where it’s most easy to get lazy, that I’m not making them mostly white guys.

I see a lot of authors talk about being nervous about writing characters of different racial backgrounds, sexual orientations, or other underrepresented groups, because they’re worried they’ll get it “wrong” and offend people. And I get that, because I worry about those things too. These are some things I find it helpful to remember:

-Those characters are people just as much as any others you write. There is no universal black experience, lesbian experience, person who uses a wheelchair experience. If you flesh out all your characters and avoid making one characteristic the entirety of that character’s “personality,” you’re a lot less likely to end up with a stereotype.

-It’s not hard to find out more about perspectives different from your own these days. Just on the internet, you can find people of pretty much every ethnic background, orientation, and physical/mental make-up in existence sharing their thoughts and experiences. There are also lots of people just in the writing community (as well as elsewhere) who are happy to chat or look at your work if you have concerns and are trying to make sure you’re handling a particular topic or issue with sensitivity.

-The more diversity you include in your stories, the easier it’ll be to avoid offensive portrayals. If you have one character of color, and that character dies halfway through the book or is the main villain or has stereotypical interests, it looks bad. If you have several characters of color, and some survive and some don’t, some are heroic and others villainous, and they span a wide range of interests and personalities, it’s usually clear you’re not making some sort of statement with any particular one of them.

-That said, you have to let your story dictate what sort of diversity is authentic in that context. It makes a lot more sense to see a diverse set of characters in a story that needs to take place in a modern urban setting than a small town, for example, or in certain places in certain parts of history. If you feel like you’re not just recognizing the diversity that would exist and including it in your story, but forcing it in, it’s probably going to feel forced to the reader too–like you’re just adding in tokens rather than making characters who are organic to the story. You just want to watch that you’re giving authenticity it’s due even when it’s not slanted toward your defaults. Small town America might be mostly white, but if your next story is set in, say, Shanghai, it’ll look rather odd unless most of your characters are Chinese.

-Including diverse characters in your stories doesn’t mean you have to make your stories primarily about prejudice or discrimination or related conflicts. In fact, only allowing characters from underrepresented groups to have stories relating to their race or sexual orientation or other “difference,” while better than not representing them at all, is still marginalizing them. There are many stories about white people that have nothing to do with them being white; many stories about straight people that have nothing to do with their heterosexuality. YA fiction will only be truly diverse when LGBT characters and characters of color and so on are defeating evil wizards and falling in love with vampires and leading dystopian rebellions too.

-If you’re worried about writing fully-realized, non-stereotypical characters, you’re a lot less likely to be making awful mistakes than the people who just don’t care. It’s the people who aren’t giving it much thought who mess up the most.

-You probably will make mistakes. I doubt I said everything perfectly during the panel yesterday. I doubt I’ve said everything perfectly in this post. Generally speaking, no one expects you to get it perfect. What they expect is that if they point out to you that you messed up somehow, you accept that criticism and work on doing things better next time. You rarely look like a jerk unless you respond to the criticism with defensiveness and hostility.

And now I am open to any thoughts, experiences, criticism, and otherwise on writing diversity. 🙂